Feedback on blogs

This is our feedback on the data visualisation of other groups’ blogs.
For group ABBDJ, considering the soccer data(https://group3proj.wixsite.com/website), we think that the research questions are very clear and well formulated. The topic is very up to date and reinforced by scientific papers. The idea of representing the data on a soccer field is really nice. Because of the many research questions, it might be too much information to display on just the soccer field background. Maybe it is also an idea to display information on the centre circle, dimensions of the soccer field to prevent it from becoming messy, or maybe center down to one research question. Keep it up and I look forward to finally getting an answer to the question if Italian football players like to lie on the ground as much as it feels like!

For group MMNR, visualising the domestic violence data(https://datavizmnmr.medium.com/domestic-violence-against-women-6d0877bdbe38), we all agreed that the topic is undeniably important and still needs a lot of research, especially with the covid situation and things seemingly changing for the worse. Looking at your miro board, it was very clear and well organised. A more indepth look into the original dataset would be awesome to have, so the reader can see what possibilities there might be and where the journey goes. In addition to that, it would be nice to see explanation for a couple of examples of your design drafts and the emerging ideas. It’s still a bit unclear for us what you’re going for with your design. Overall very nice dataset with a lot of possibilities to visualise!