The Giving Tree II

a fan-fiction continuation

Itai Bronshtein
Smart Octopus Press
3 min readAug 20, 2024

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…but not really.

After a long time

The tree spoke up.

“I am sorry, Boy,” said the tree,

“but you have given

Me nothing all these years —

You only see me when you have needs,

But what about my basic needs?”

“I’ve been so busy all my life,

With my house, career, and family”, said the boy.

“You haven’t watered my roots once,”

Said the tree, “How am I to stay alive?”

“I didn’t ever think of that, but I’m too old

to fetch water,” said the boy.

“I’m alone in this forest,

You never bothered planting

other trees”, said the tree,

“You cannot grow” —

“You don’t need friends,

When you have me”, sighed the boy,

“Are you really going to ask an old man to dig holes

In the ground and plant new seeds

Which he can’t enjoy?”

“I have given you everything I have to give…

Someday you will be gone, and I will still be here,

alone, again…”

“You should have told me that when I was younger”,

said the boy,

“But now it’s too late for me to do anything.”

“Well,” said the tree, with a resentful voice,

“I didn’t want to tell you what to do because

You seemed smart enough to figure it on your own

And giving is meant to be genuine, not forced — ”

“How selfish of you” said the boy,

“Can’t you see I’m dying here?”

“Well, a pile of dirt is a good place to

die for its from where you came;

Forget about everything else, and lay your head

down to rest one last time.”

And the boy listened.

And the boy died.

And the tree was alone.

And after a long time,

Two girls came back.

And everyday the girls would play

Games of tag around the tree

And gather sticks and blades of grass

And put them in their baskets

And call it ‘Elephant Stew’.

And they would bring tea cups and a kettle

Along with their stuffed animals

And have tea parties with the tree.

And when they were tired,

As the sun would set amidst a pink sky

They would pack their belongings up

And their mother would call them for supper,

And they would leave the tree alone again —

And the tree was ok.

As time went by,

The girls played around the tree more and more.

They even planted a garden filled with

Rose bushes, lilies and hydrangeas.

As the garden became more colorful,

The tree began to heal.

First, her trunk began to grow back,

And her branches too.

Eventually her leaves and apples came back,

But the girls would never pick on the tree.

And one day, when the girls came back

With their stuffed animals

And a few friends

And had a tea party that

the whole forest heard,

The tree spoke up, and said,

“Thank you.”

And the girls smiled back with their mother’s

Strict-seasoned autumn-eyes of grace

As their friends shared sips and giggles

And the tree was unconditionally loved

for the first time in her life.

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Itai Bronshtein
Smart Octopus Press

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