Productivity is sexy for success is a myth- my real-life experience(poetic)

In chasing organized life, choosing machines to do it and becoming like them

Amit way
Storymaker
4 min readNov 11, 2022

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The day I was born was simple

simple enough to choose

smile and play as I wished

As I pulled into this world,

the world of wins and losses

I lost the life I wished for in my dreams

I lost the game

before I could know how to win,

the unworthy game of whims

the world now demands robots

with AI and ML as its heart and mind

as if humans no longer deserve

to have real mind and souls

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However, it’s not a new innovation

to treat souls like soles, our past knows it well

what threatens more is our ability

to remain productive in chaos,

the chaos of smiling faces

with broken hearts,

the chaos of drying life

with shining income charts,

the chaos of keeping heads high

between life and death,

yet losing every day, each moment

in search of a good life

and a smile.

Yes, we are provided with tools to look calm

we call them mindfulness meditation or

sometimes yoga of modern life

but we only have 24 hours to

act and live like machines

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if we dare not to act

we only look like a lonely machine

with no power system

however, we have engineers to deal with that,

we call them psychologist and psychiatrist

of mortal beings

it’s not our fault

we do what we are taught,

we fear jobs shrinking

we fear the GDP falling down

and yet we desire to remain calm

and glow like sun everyday

with shining smiles & a kind heart.

sometimes I think…

if productivity means organized life

then nature must have an answer

cause it is the most productive system

even humans crave it since old times

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So I took a day off from my (robot) life

I met an old wise woman near my old house.

All I did was, raise my buried questions

all she did was, look with an easy smile

and then replied,

“Hello, my poor young boy,

you have mistaken life,

It’s not that you are stuck or live unworthy life

it’s just that

you avoid the light

and chase the dark

in name of a productive life

you remain in a chaotic life”.

As I reflect back,

the child comes back in me

and he saidhey buddy! leave your mobile

come with me, let’s ride in a muddy pool for a while

and get dirty, it’s cool, why look so shy

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I just followed him

this time

unproductively,

I found what I meant to

this time,

productively.

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