Does Figurative Language Work in Narrative ?

Yes! Let me demonstrate

The aroma of the chocolate chip cookies beckoned to me with the promise of a passionate kiss pushing me to walk quicker to the kitchen. Desire was the devil on my shoulder guiding me to the gold bars of sweetness, tempting me to pilfer the treasure. Juxtaposed by my conscious that reminded of a goal to fit into my new jeans before date night, I…



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Brenda Mahler

Real life person sharing real life stories. Writing about travel, dogs, and healthy lifestyles.