How I Replace My Placeholder Slang with Good Descriptions

“She was hella shook”

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Sometimes my brain poops on the page like an untrained puppy and it’s only through countless revisions that I transform my pure brain poop into beautiful sentences that make publishers think I’m publishable.

Part of this is because I don’t focus on polishing my writing on the first draft. I just get it…