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Seven Types of Paragraph Development

Annotated examples of narration, exposition, definition, classification, description, process analysis, and persuasion.

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by Gerald Grow

When people use language, they don’t reinvent it every time they want to say something. They use certain recurring forms of communication. These forms work because both the speaker and the listener understand how to use them as a way of thinking. So do the writer and the reader.

Some of the “modes of discourse” (to use the formal name) such as narration, have been expertly used by humans since the first storytellers, and persuasion has existed since the first argument.

Most of the modes, however, gained so much power with the invention of writing and printing that it was as if they were reinvented then. When people read and go to school, among the most useful tools they learn are these modes of discourse, which become so internalized that they function without notice.

The modes are deeply embedded in how we think. They are essential parts of the mental technology of civilization, made possible by the alphabet that led to written language, amplified by literacy, and promulgated by education.

The modes are ways of thinking that literacy has made into almost universal, shared, powerful ways to communicate meaning through words. If you use the modes consciously when you write, you will write more effectively.

This approach applies to a certain kind of writing, what is sometimes called “expository fully-elaborated nonfiction prose” — as in nonfiction books, magazine articles, college papers, and official reports. These are “fully-elaborated” in the sense that the writer has thought them through, spelled out the implications, and there are no huge gaps in reasoning or content.

The modes of discourse work not because they help you write better, but because they help readers understand what you write. To readers, these are modes of thought, and they work unnoticed to interpret what was written.

Of course you want to be creative and original. You want to write things that stand out, leap from the page — words that get up and dance.

But extraordinary moments happen only when there is a functional, effective, comfortable background of ordinary moments. Mastering these modes of writing will help you create that background. These ordinary modes may, indeed, be enough by themselves, because most articles don’t need to sing and dance — they just need to help readers learn in 10 minutes something that took you 10 hours (or 10 weeks!) to learn, think through, and write down.

In succession, the following paragraphs illustrate the modes of narration, exposition, definition, classification, description, process analysis, and persuasion. Each is followed by a brief commentary.

In most writing, these modes are mixed in natural combinations. For example, telling a story with narration often includes description. The following paragraphs have been devised in an attempt to emphasize the characteristics of each mode of writing. The result is somewhat artificial–you would not normally write an article containing one each of seven types of paragraphs–but I hope it is more memorable than a series of unrelated illustrations.

Narration

Around 2 a.m. something woke Charles Hanson up. He lay in the dark listening. Something felt wrong. Outside, crickets sang, tree-frogs chirruped. Across the distant forest floated two muffled hoots from a horned owl. It was too quiet. At home in New Jersey, the nights are filled with the busy, sounds of traffic. You always have the comforting knowledge that other people are all around you. And light: At home he can read in bed by the glow of the streetlight. It was too quiet. And much too dark. Even starlight failed to penetrate the 80-foot canopy of trees the camper was parked beneath. It was the darkest dark he had ever seen. He felt for the flashlight beside his bunk. It was gone. He found where his pants were hanging and, as he felt the pockets for a box of matches, something rustled in the leaves right outside the window, inches from his face. He heard his wife, Wanda, hold her breath; she was awake, too. Then, whatever, was outside in the darkness also breathed, and the huge silence of the night seemed to come inside the camper, stifling them. It was then he decided to pack up and move to a motel.

Comments on narration:

  • Narration is normally chronological (though sometimes it uses flashbacks)
  • It gives a sequential presentation of the events that add up to a story.
  • A narrative differs from a mere listing of events. Narration usually contains characters, a setting, a conflict, and a resolution. Time and place and person are normally established. In this paragraph, the “story” components are: a protagonist (Hanson), a setting (the park), a goal (to camp), an obstacle (his fear of the night), a climax (the panic), and a resolution (leaving).
  • In a story, often something happens near the end that echoes the beginning, or resolves it. Many stories have a circular, looping form that ties things together.
  • Specific details always help a story, but so does interpretive language. You don’t just lay the words on the page; you point them in the direction of a story.
  • The narrative in this example could serve as the opening anecdote that illustrates the topic of an article that follow.

Exposition

This family was a victim of a problem they could have avoided–a problem that, according to Florida park rangers, hundreds of visitors suffer each year. “Several times a month,” ranger Rod Torres of O’Leno State Park said, “people get scared and leave the park in the middle of the night.” Those people picked the wrong kind of park to visit. Not that there was anything wrong with the park: The hikers camped next to them loved the wild isolation of it. But it just wasn’t the kind of place the couple from New Jersey had in mind when they decided to camp out on this trip through Florida. If they had known about the different kinds of parks in Florida, they might have stayed in a place they loved.

Comments on exposition:

  • Exposition is explanatory writing
  • Exposition can be an incidental part of a description or a narration, or it can be the heart of an article
  • Aside from clarity, the key problem with exposition is credibility. What makes your explanation believable? Normally, writers solve this problem by citing authorities who have good credentials and good reason to be experts in the subject.
  • This paragraph also happens to serve as the justifier or “nut graf” for the little article: the paragraph that, after an indirect opening, specifies the topic of the article, why it is important, why your account is credible, and what is to come.

Definition

“Park” is difficult to define in Florida, because there are so many kinds of parks. Basically, a park is a place to go for outdoor recreation-to swim, picnic, hike, camp, walk the dog, play tennis, paddle your canoe, and, in some places take rides in miniature trains or swish down a waterslide. Florida has a rich variety of parks, ranging from RVs ringed around recreation halls, to thousands of acres of impenetrable wilderness. To make things more complicated, not all of them are called “parks,” and even the ones called “parks” come in several varieties.

Comments on definition:

  • Never define anything by the “according to Webster’s” method. Meaning is found in the world, not in the dictionary. Bring the world into your story and use it to define your terms in your own words.
  • Saying what something is NOT can help readers; but make a strong effort to say what it IS.
  • The paragraph above is the beginning of a definition, to be continued as the article goes on.

Description

O’Leno is a good example of a state park in Florida. Surrounded by the tall, shaded woods of a beautiful hardwood forest, the Santa Fe River disappears in a large, slowly swirling, tree-lined pool. After appearing intermittently in scattered sinkholes, the river rises three miles downstream in a big boil, then continues on to meet the Suwannee and the sea. Nearby, stands of cypress mirror themselves in the still waters, walls of dense river swamp rise before you, sudden sinkholes open in the woodlands-rich with cool ferns and mosses. Farther from the river, expanses of longleaf pinelands stretch across rolling hills. In the midst of this lovely setting, you find 65 campsites, 18 rustic cabins, and a pavilion for group meetings. A diving platform marks a good place to swim in the soft, cool waters of the Santa Fe, and canoeing up this dark river is like traveling backwards in time in the direction of original Florida.

Comments on description:

  • Description is not an account of what you saw, but the details that readers need in order to imagine the scene, person, object, etc. Description feeds details into readers’ minds, one by one, so they can imagine the scene.
  • Description requires you to record a series of detailed observations. Be especially careful to make real observations.
  • Use sensory language. Go light on adjectives and adverbs. Look for ways to describe action. Pay special attention to the sound and rhythm of words; use these when you can. Remember, it is not your writing that matters, but how well your writing gets read.
  • Think that your language is not so much describing a thing as describing a frame around the thing–a frame so vivid that your reader can pour imagination into it and “see” the thing–even though you never showed it. Portray, yes, but mainly evoke.
  • The key problem in description is to avoid being static or flat. Adopt a strategy that makes your description into a little story: move from far to near, left to right, old to new, or, as in the example above, down a river, to give your description a natural flow.
  • Think of description as a little narrative in which the visual characteristics unfold in a natural, interesting, dramatic order. Think of what pieces readers need, in what order, to construct a scene. Try making the description a little dramatic revelation, like watching an actor put on a costume–where you cannot decipher what the costume means until many of the parts are in place.
  • Never tease readers or withhold descriptive detail, unless for some strange reason that is the nature of your writing. Lay it out. Give your description away as generously as the world gives away sights. Let it show as transparently as seeing.
  • The cognitive difficulty in description is simple: People see all-at-once. But they read sequentially, one-part-at-the-time, in a series of pieces. Choose the pieces. Sequence them so they add up. Think: Readers first read this, now this, now this; what do they need next? How can I help them get these parts inside, then use them to construct the whole?
  • Remember, you never just describe something: The description is always part of a larger point. Use the description to make your point, or to move your story along.

Comparison

Forest and river dominate O’Leno State Park. By contrast, Lloyd Beach State Recreation Area, near Fort Lauderdale, is dominated by the oily bodies of sun-worshippers who crowd into it every summer weekend. Where O’Leno gives you so much quiet you can hear the leaves whispering, Lloyd Beach is a place of boisterous activity. You can walk a few yards in O’Leno and pass beyond every sign of human civilization. When you walk at Lloyd Beach, you have to be careful to step over the picnic baskets, umbrellas, jam boxes, and browning bodies. At night, O’Leno wraps itself with the silence of crickets and owls. Lloyd Beach is busy with fishermen till well past midnight. If you want to fish near town, or dive into the busy bustle of an urban beach, Lloyd Beach is the place to go. But if you want to stand at the edge of civilization and look across time into an older natural world, O’Leno is the park to visit.

Comments on comparison:

  • There is a helpful technique for writing a comparison. If you follow it, your comparisons will benefit.
  • Before writing a comparison, draw up a chart and fill it in, to make certain you have all the elements necessary to write a comparison.
  • As in the model below, list the two items being compared (O’Leno and Lloyd Beach), and the criteria by which they will be compared (noise, people, water, features, wildlife).
  • If you do not make such a chart, there is a chance you will have a hole in your comparison.
  • Then choose whether to go “down the columns” or “across the rows” in writing your description.
  • Either describe all of O’Leno and compare it to all of Lloyd Beach by working “down” columns two and three, or take the first category, “noise” and compare the two parks in terms of it, then the next category, “people,” and so on, “across the rows.”
  • Once you commit to a “down” or “across” strategy, stick with it till the end of the comparison. Readers will thank you.

Process Analysis

Note: I couldn’t think of a way to write the following paragraphs that followed naturally from the previous material. For the next paragraph, pretend you are reading an article on how to put up a particular brand of tent.

When you find the park you are looking for, you will need to make camp. One person can set up the FamilyProof Tent, though it is easier with two. Here’s how:

  • First, clear a 9 by 9 foot area of snags, limbs, and anything that might pierce the bottom of the tent. Unfold the tent so that the corners of the waterproof bottom form a square. Peg down the corners of the bottom.
  • Next, snap Together all four external tent-poles (they are held together by shock cords to make sure you get the pieces matched up).
  • Place a pole near each of the pegs. Thread each pole through the two loops leading toward the top of the tent.
  • After you have all four poles in place, lift one of the poles. While holding the pole up, pull its guyrope tight and peg the guyrope down, so that the pole is held up by the guyrope and the pegs on opposing sides of the tent bottom.
  • Lift the pole on the opposite side of the tent in the same way, but this time, fit it into the upper end of the standing pole before securing its guywire.
  • Assemble the two remaining tent poles in a similar manner.
  • Finally, unroll the front flap to form an awning. Prop up the awning with the two remaining poles and secure them with guyropes.

Now you are ready to move in.

Comments on process analysis:

  • In describing how a process happens or how to perform a series of actions, always think of your readers: Can they follow this?
  • Analyze the process into a series of steps. Put the steps into sequence.
  • Isolate the steps: number then, use bullets, put them in separate paragraphs.
  • Use illustrations keyed to the steps when appropriate: People can often read diagrams better than they can read lists of steps. Pictures alone, however, are rarely enough — as you probably know from trying to assemble a product where the instructions are in Chinese.
  • Always ask an outsider to read your process analysis to see if it can be followed. Once you are close to a subject, it is difficult to know when you have left something out. And nothing is more frustrating for readers than a missing step.

Persuasion

Before you go camping in Florida, plan ahead. Don’t wind up in the wilds when you want to be near Disney World, and don’t wind up on a concrete RV pad when you really want the forest primeval. Find out what parks are available, and what they are like. Get good information on what to expect, and what your options are. This can make all the difference in the quality of your vacation.

Comments on persuasion:

  • This paragraph is a small example of the kind of writing used widely in editorials and columns, and it uses a direct, exhortatory approach: Believe Me and Do It!
  • This persuasive paragraph also serves as the ending to this little article and brings a sense of closure in the form of, “OK, now get up and act!”
  • To persuade people to change their minds or take an action, more is needed than your opinion or sense of conviction. You need to supply them with the information, analysis, and context they need to form their own opinions, make their own judgments, and take action.
  • Remember: Readers are interested in only one opinion–their own. If you can help them formulate and deepen that opinion, they will be glad they read your work.

Afterthought

When you learn to write effectively, people will start to believe you.

At first, this sounds great! But soon you find that writing well brings a profound responsibility: You have to be trustworthy. You need to make every effort to be right. You need to be fair, truthful, open about your limits, ready to learn from your mistakes.

Good writing cannot substitute for the hard, detailed, careful, thoughtful, ethical work that makes it worth reading.

That is why so many editors slash through passages of “good writing,” with a note like: “Replace this fluff with something you had to get off your butt and go find out.”

I hope this article helps you communicate what you got up and found out.

Gerald Grow is a retired journalism professor. More at longleaf.net.

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Gerald Grow

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Gerald Grow is a retired journalism professor, cartoonist, and photographer. More at longleaf.net.

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