Sai RamachandranVoicietyThe original headline took too long to get to the point. So I merged the headline and the subheading as follows-Jul 10, 2018
Sai RamachandranFilioSoft“Conference Apps SaaS platform” is too geeky for the average conference organizer. KISS! So I changed it to “Get an App for your Next…Jul 10, 2018
Sai RamachandranLearniOSCoding.comI didn’t like that “Part Time” was at the same level as “Learn building iOS Apps”. Part time is generally a secondary feature while…Jul 9, 2018Jul 9, 2018
Sai RamachandranFullServiceI like to focus the headline on the client’s needs. With freelancers, the usual questions relate to quality and unreliable results. So, the…Jul 10, 2018Jul 10, 2018
Sai RamachandranSwapcardThe real attraction of a product like Swapcard is that it makes attendees addicted to the event in question. They want to come back to it…Jul 9, 2018Jul 9, 2018
Sai RamachandranVoicietyThe original headline took too long to get to the point. So I merged the headline and the subheading as follows-Jul 10, 2018
Sai RamachandranFilioSoft“Conference Apps SaaS platform” is too geeky for the average conference organizer. KISS! So I changed it to “Get an App for your Next…Jul 10, 2018
Sai RamachandranLearniOSCoding.comI didn’t like that “Part Time” was at the same level as “Learn building iOS Apps”. Part time is generally a secondary feature while…Jul 9, 2018
Sai RamachandranFullServiceI like to focus the headline on the client’s needs. With freelancers, the usual questions relate to quality and unreliable results. So, the…Jul 10, 2018
Sai RamachandranSwapcardThe real attraction of a product like Swapcard is that it makes attendees addicted to the event in question. They want to come back to it…Jul 9, 2018
Sai RamachandranRezio.meI found “The best way…” very abstract. Best as compared to what? So I changed that to “Easily manage your online business”Jul 9, 2018
Sai RamachandranCollectTrustI felt “Be a Trusted Business” was too abstract. I’d go with a more concrete “Win More Business” headline.Jul 9, 2018
Sai RamachandranUseRibbonExcuse my bluntness but there is something vaguely “crazy” about the original copy. When I visit a website, I don’t expect to do something…May 18, 2018
