Essay Writing
Thesis Statement Do’s and Don’ts
Importance of a Thesis Statement:
The most important aspect of essay writing is to have a strong thesis statement.
A thesis statement makes an argument about the particular subject you're discussing. It also signposts to the reader the points that will be used throughout the essay to support this argument.
Consequently, a thesis statement tells the reader “why” your argument is important and attempts to convince the reader to read the rest of your paper.
- Don't write “I think” or “in my opinion”. This weakens your point, even though your thesis is your own opinion you will need to state it as though if it was a fact to convince others of your point of view. A Lawyer doesn’t say “I think my client is innocent” he/she says “my client is innocent”.
- Don't use overgeneralized words or statements. Examples of this would be: Successful, good, fail etc. And: Humans have always… Since the beginning of time…Be specific!
- Don't state the obvious. You're writing because you have something to say and to show your readers. Don't bore your readers with facts they already know. Keep them reading by saying something new, different and interesting.
- Don't use cliches, idioms, or complex vocabulary. Be clear and approachable.
- Don't repeat yourself. Don’t, please, just don’t. ☺
- Do mention your subject. If you’re talking about a story, textbook, article, person… You need to mention the name and the source. Many forget and mention later on. This really throw the reader off from your original topic.
- Make an argument. Your thesis needs to be debatable. If no one can disagree with you, it’s a fact not an opinion.
- Do use the active voice. Instead of “it has been said” tell us who really says this “The New York Times indicates…”. This is affirmative, informative and clear.
- Do outline your main points. This is called signposting because it signals to your reader the points that will be covered throughout the essay.
- Do be original. A thesis statement is your point of view. No one can speak for yourself but yourself! Be creative, inspiring and powerful with your thoughts and words.
If you're interested in seeing how to write or how to teach a thesis statement, check out my post on Edutopia “What’s a Thesis Statement?”
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