Tear in the Crimson Satin

A poem of how even a rose can communicate its pains

Spooky™ Bee Jones
The Black Veil
1 min readMar 30, 2024

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Photo by Afra Ramió on Unsplash

You gave me a rose from your garden.
I wish I’d known what I know now,
that your garden was barren.

I put your curated rose in a vase.
It was dark, so I couldn’t see the water
change color inside, it stood transparent.

What was once clear, became the color of
bloodied mud. I couldn’t just bring myself to
peek inside and see. Nor could I stand to

smell the petals’ core. I thought it would smell
like love. Instead, I smelled the symbol of
decayed romance, discordant harmony.

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Spooky™ Bee Jones
The Black Veil

Musician. Writer. Poetess. Actual vampire. Sensualist. Mainly fiction, poetry + cultural commentary post-2015. https://beacons.page/spookybambina