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The Book Mechanic

Keep Your Fiction Flowing

How to write smooth transitions

Photo by Damon Hall on Unsplash

See if you can spot the error in the following snippet of story:

“Don’t you ever do that again!” Petunia shrieked as she slapped Robert’s face hard enough to spin his head.

Robert rubbed the sore spot. “Do what?”

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Dale E. Lehman

Dale E. Lehman

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Award-winning author of mysteries, science fiction, humor, and more. See my freebies for readers and writers at https://www.daleelehman.com/free-ebook-offer.