A VALENTINE TANKA

The Mountains are Red!

Nature, my lover, breaks my heart open

Jenine "Jeni" Baines
The Brain is a Noodle
2 min readFeb 10, 2022

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Photo by Will Turner on Unsplash

Dawn reaches high tide
Clasped coffee blesses my hands
Mountains seek my gaze
Trails and trees Valentine rose
Awed heartbreak tastes of candy

©Jenine Bsharah Baines 2022

Before I continue, has anyone experienced Medium ‘eating’ a draft???

Oh, well, let’s see what happens this go round…

Lucy Dan 蛋小姐 (she/her/她), thank you for the prompt on “heartbreak.” The Muse was in the mood to hike a different path with this. Hope you enjoy this tanka, dear readers, as much we did creating it.

Love, as we will discuss, is a power — perhaps the greatest power that we have to give to one another. Love is capable of restoring a person to the threads of life, to inspiring a person to want to live, and to giving someone (including ourselves) the capacity to endure the unendurable. Love is no ordinary force. Indeed…

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Jenine "Jeni" Baines
The Brain is a Noodle

Little old lady from Pasadena. Granny going, going, going...fueled by the Light within Beauty. Head over heels in love with words. and words.