Jan 8
I asked my beta readers for feedback. Here are some of their comments.
Overall it has a heartfelt message, but it needs more variety in its execution. Try using elegy or haiku.
2. Is punctuation working?
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Rose C. G. is a poet, artist, storyteller, teacher and dreamer. Work is © Rose CG 2022. (My posts may contain affiliate links, I may earn a commission.)
