Haiku 2023–257
Published in
Sep 14, 2023
doffing verdant hues
September slips into
something more yellow
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Yes, I’m a syllable short in the middle line, but that’s where I ended up. Where I would have liked to end up is…
doffing verdant hues
September slips into
something a bit more yellow
…but that takes me even farther away from haiku, doesn’t it?