Scent Of A Man

E Barnes
The Haven
Published in
1 min readMay 9, 2020

She stood behind me in the grocery store. Some guy in front of me had a problem and the cashier had to turn on the blinking light, bringing the line to a halt.

“You smell good.” At first I didn’t think she was talking to me. No woman has given me a compliment like that since college.

“Thanks,” I stuttered.

“Let me guess…Marlowe Number 102?”

I had no idea what she meant so I just shrugged.

The cashier gave me a she’s-way-too-young-for-you look.

When I returned home, my wife, still in the sweat pants and t-shirt she wore to bed last night, inventoried the bags.

“Not these, George, damn it.” She slammed the cookies on the counter. “Pecan, not hazlenut.” I didn’t hear the rest, something about it was a simple task and I couldn’t get it right.

I headed back out the door.

“Where are you going?” she inquired while dumping her cigarette butt in a coffee cup by the sink.

“I forgot soap.” The last words I ever said to her.

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E Barnes
The Haven

My Flash Fiction collection, “Flash Crazy” is available at Amazon: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B097486PFJ. Many of the stories first published here at Medium.