Love and Mercy, it is so Quiet

A narrative poetic exercise and meditation

John Hampton (MaggotsX)
The Interstitial
2 min readJun 14, 2024

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Photo by Atte Grönlund on Unsplash

— I cannot hear anymore,
it is so quiet now. Not even the chatter of the earthworms.

Quiet,

the earth does not take its time to wake, though:
the cicadas hum, with screeching fiddles,
our ponds have their own rhythms — movements,
the orange and purple haze above the cornfields.
I can see it so clearly in the fog,
the rocks of the damn [holding back, holding].
It is so quiet now. Not even the chatter of the earthworms.
I rub my hands and fingers along my corduroy zipper:
feeling the outline of my android telephone —
there it buzzes like a fly, that I cannot ignore;
the grasshoppers whine, a lawnmower in my soul;
there is a quiet music in these beats, I cannot hear anymore,

quiet

There is a quiet music in these beats, I cannot hear anymore:
the grasshoppers whine, a lawnmower in my soul;
there it buzzes like a fly, that I cannot ignore;
feeling the outline of my android telephone —
I rub my hands and fingers along my corduroy zipper:
it is so quiet now. Not even the chatter of the earthworms.
the rocks of the damn [holding back, holding].
I can see it so clearly in the fog,
the orange and purple haze above the cornfields;
Our ponds have their own rhythms, movements;
the cicadas hum, with a screeching fiddle;
The earth does not take its time to wake, though,

quiet —

the earth does not take its time to wake, though:
The cicadas hum, with a screeching fiddle;
Our ponds have their own rhythms, movements;
the orange and purple haze above the cornfields.
I can see it so clearly in the fog,
the rocks of the damn [holding back, holding].
It is so quiet now. Not even the chatter of the earthworms.
I rub my hands and fingers along my corduroy zipper:
feeling the outline of my android telephone —
there it buzzes like a fly that I cannot ignore;
the grasshoppers whine, a lawnmower in my soul;
there is a quiet music in these beats, I cannot hear anymore.

Quiet,

there is a quiet music in these beats, I cannot hear anymore.
It is so quiet now. Not even the chatter of the earthworms —

John R. Hampton
Maggots X @ 2024.06.12

I would like to attribute credit to this poetic form to Sheridan Walter. His base form structure can be found here. I chose to embellish it some for my purposes. It was an excellent poetic form for this…

Poetry prompt!. Yay! | by Sheridan Walter | Jun, 2024 | Medium

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John Hampton (MaggotsX)
The Interstitial

Medicated Bipolar (25 yr. stable), Army-Brat, US Navy Veteran, World Traveller, IT Developer, Husband, Spiritual not Religious, Storyteller, Feeler. Poet.