Commentary: Rubik’s essay

How do I face hardship?

Like William, I also have a way to face hardship and it is basketball this sport it is a distraction to me from the outer world, it is like feeling free with no worries.

Basketball has taught me to keep getting up every time I’m losing or I’m playing a bad game, well this is the same with life when it puts you between the ropes and there is not a way out, you have to learn to get up and no matter how many times you fall, while you keep getting up and fighting, nothing can stop you.

I have learned, that mistakes are a part of your life and you have to learn from them.

Reflective Response to Oscar:

• I think it’s a good reflection, the way he explains how he reacts when he has some difficulty and it should be mentioned that the comment is written in the grammatically correct way.