Rubik’s Essay

Commentary

How do I face hardship?

I think my problems are not that big as from the guy, mines are little because I don’t have any illness but I admire the way he endure with his problem and the way he relate his problem with the Rubick cube and his environment.

Personally, the way in which I solve my problems is by first thinking in their different possibilities in the way I can act and their consequences, but if the problem is big and there is nothing to do I just pretend to be fine and when I am with my friends I forget everything about that

Reply to my classmate commentary

I understand what you wanted to say but there are some grammar errors and your reflection for me is incomplete , and I notice that you separe the paragraph in two when it should be together.