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Unwilling Departures

Nitish Patnaik
The Shortform
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1 min readMar 20, 2024

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“Is there anything left in the house ?"
"No we’re set."
"Great, lock it up and let’s leave."
"Wait mom, I need to check something."

Nitin rushed back into the empty house. His boots were echoing through the house; the same echo he heard when he first entered there four years ago. He went to his room and found a mark on the wall near the door, and a little drawing of a stick figure dancing next to it. That was his height marked three years ago. He touched that drawing and a bunch of tears let themselves out and rolled down his cheeks. He only got a few moments before he felt a hand sit gently on his shoulder.

"It's getting dark now, come on."
"Yeah”.

Nitin took a big sniff and had one last look at the little drawing before turning off the lights on his way out.

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Nitish Patnaik
The Shortform

22 y.o. desi guy who’s confused AF about life and interested in way too many things. I’m that guy who just can’t write short sentences and short paragraphs.