A Long Walk in a Lost World

Finding my father in a classic book about Eastern Europe

Nick Owchar
E³ — Entertain Enlighten Empower
3 min readFeb 11, 2024

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Carpathians in Western Ukraine (Wikimedia Commons)

Back in 1934, Patrick Leigh Fermor did something that most of us dream about doing (and never do). He took a long walk across Europe with the goal of reaching Constantinople.

He never made it the way he’d planned, but the journey produced two extraordinary books — A Time of Gifts and Between the Woods and the Water. The minute they appeared they were insta-classics.

He never quite reached Galicia either, but he did walk through parts of the forests of the Carpathian range, which stretch throughout the region and that are visible from my dad’s village. I sometimes wonder what might have happened if he’d reached Galicia — maybe he would’ve met my dad, who was a boy of nine or ten when Fermor was on his trek.

Unexpectedly personal

When I first read Fermor back in the late ’90s, his books put me back in touch with my dad again (who’d died a few years before) in a special way. He reminded me of our own trip to Galicia, of the month we spent there, of our ventures into the Carpathians, of forests so thick and primeval and the air so pungent it makes you slightly lose your mind.

Fermor makes a few occasional references to the Ruthenes (another name for the Ukrainians), the Hutsuls, and the awkward identity of the Uniates (that branch of Byzantine Christianity recognized by Rome that my dad was a member of).

During our Galician travels, we experienced plenty of moments like the following one that shows you the peace and simplicity that all Slavs share — at least until the Butcher of the Kremlin started lobbing bombs into such scenes almost two years ago:

An hour’s climb ended on the edge of a slanting field where a string of reapers were getting in the late upland harvest: biblical, white-clad countrymen and women in wide hats of plaited straw, some with babies slung across their backs like papooses; when they got in the way, they hung them in the shade, snugly laced into their wooden troughs. Baskets, water jars, sickles and rakes were heaped up, half-a-dozen ponies were grazing and conical bee-hives were set in rows along the edge of the enfolding trees. As they moved forward and reaped and gathered and gleaned, an old woman’s high quaver sang the lead of a never-ending sequence of verses to a grave and rather haunting tune; the others joined in each second line… I had heard it on the climb to the little plateau; it still floated up diminuendo long after the harvesters themselves had dropped out of sight….

Beautiful, right? We encountered similar scenes, more than 60 years later, on the outskirts of the cities of Striy and Kalush. And I’ll never forget coming upon Vasyl, the husband of our cousin, sitting out in a meadow near his house, watching his sheep graze. It was so friggen bucolic and beautiful everywhere that I never wanted to leave.

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Don’t rush your writing

Fermor didn’t start composing these two books about his travels until he was in his sixties. He had one helluva memory (and lots of detailed notebooks). The writing’s so crisp and immediate that it’s astonishing to think that decades passed before he did this.

But there’s a lesson about writing in this that I want to share. That lesson boils down to one simple question: What’s your hurry?

Instead of hurrying to get a book done so you can add “author” to your social profile, why not take longer and get it right? If you do, it might be remembered longer than what you get from using one of those rush-into-print publishing services that cost a bundle and fade away in a week.

Fermor’s books took a long time to make — and like the singing he heard that day in the Carpathian uplands, they won’t soon be forgotten.

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Nick Owchar
E³ — Entertain Enlighten Empower

Novelist, former L.A. Times editor and critic, contributor to the Los Angeles Review of Books, author of the forthcoming novel "A Walker in the Evening."