Poetry

Enjambment

A poem about poetic limits

Brian S. Hook
Write Under the Moon
1 min readApr 24, 2024

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Two hands, one holding the little finger of the other
Photo by NEOSiAM (Pexels)

I dabble in all forms. Poetry lives in the build.
Villanelles, terzanelles, and sonnets thrill me,
Terza rima too (though in Italian they’re easier).
I think my choriambs would win Sappho’s smile.
I craft lyrical odes with Horatian style.

Of course I have tried the simpler forms —
your tankas and haikus — but I want much more.
I want more than counting or limits placed on
rhyme or structure. Those are sparks, not flames.
Oulipo? Lipograms? Gimmicky poetic play.

I know the techniques and their names.
I have gone deep. I have written ecphrases
in hendecasyllables; I have honored the dead
in acrostic epitaphs and dignified wedded love
with epithalamia. But however I reach

I can’t extend this art across to you.
My meters and rhymes do less than
a cup of coffee ready when you wake,
less than taking your hand when we cross
a busy street, less than a smiling wordless
“I love you.”

Thank you for reading, my friends.

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Brian S. Hook
Brian S. Hook

Written by Brian S. Hook

Dad, classicist, mountain dweller, erstwhile triathlete, wannabe woodworker, follower of Socrates and Jesus (two famous non-writers), writing to avoid raveling

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