Brown Eyed Boy

A measure of profound wisdom, if not perfection, is the ability to stop arguing

David Pahor
The Fiction Writer’s Den
2 min readJun 25, 2024

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They embrace under the nebulae-studded heavens.
Image by © David Pahor +AI

The two whispering beings, who are, for all practical purposes, gods, confer inside the event horizon of a massive active galactic nucleus, minimising their gravitational and EM footprint, hoping to evade eavesdroppers even more formidable than themselves.

Shouldn’t we accept their truce?

Why? We are winning. We should finish this conflict as soon as possible. Billions of stellar systems have been turned into sizzling nebulae, their cores screaming in X-rays.

But it is unwise for our side to win too resolutely and put them in a position where they have nothing to lose.

— They miscalculated when they provoked us, and we’re the ones who will bring it to its close. They’re irrational.

They might employ the ultimate weapon.

— That would completely obliterate them, too.

But what if … what if I knew of a way to convince them to agree to a permanent cessation of hostilities — to a peace deal?

— And let them get away with it?

Who is being irrational now?

She realises she should stop arguing. In the time it takes her to give out the equivalent of a sigh and signal her acquiescence to him, a century passes in the Universe outside. He nods, then departs the maelstrom around the singularity without as much as a goodbye.

At last, she has no doubts at all there is utterly nothing left of that brown-eyed, smiling rogue she had embraced under an inky, nebulae-glinting sky millions of years ago, the memory of which she burnishes every few millennia to keep her sanity.

She smiles sadly. The fate of everything now depends on her — an omnipotent being that studiously hides the taint of its former animal self from the Others, which ironically offers her a broader perspective and a solution to ending the War. The way ahead is clear.

She will betray him.

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David Pahor
The Fiction Writer’s Den

Physicist turned programmer, now a writer. Writing should be truthful but never easy. When it becomes effortless, you have stopped caring. https://bit.ly/kekur0