Win Attention Or Lose Affection

Six Tips For Crafting A Compelling Caption

Barrington Dyer
2 min readApr 20, 2020

Are you looking to share an article on social media, or write a blog-post, but are unsure what to put as your headline? Here are six tips for crafting a compelling caption that can be combined in any variation.

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What’s Eye-Catching?

1. Flag Your Audience

  • ‘You’, ‘entrepreneurs’, ‘millennials’, ‘parents’, ’startups’, etc.

2. Offer Counterintuitive Take

  • Don’t follow what convention says, do this

to find work you love, don’t follow your passion” –TED Talk

Headline example (for this article): Don’t Report What’s Said, Say What’s Unsaid

  • Present a paradox (inherent contradiction)

You miss 100% of the shots you don’t take.” — attributed to Wayne Gretzky

Rule number one: ignore all the rules.

Headline example: Avert Stating the Obvious Cannot Be Overstated

  • Pair contrasting-concepts

Yesterday you said tomorrowNike campaign

Headline example: Win Your Audience Or Lose Their Attention

3. Identify Gap In Audiences’ Knowledge

  • Hone nightly news/clickbait-technique

What you don’t know about [blank] …

Top Ten [blank]…”

Headline example: Six Tips for Crafting A Compelling Caption

  • Point out potential threat (or opportunity)

Headline example: How A Headline Can Lose Your Audience

What’s Persuasive?

4. Rhyming (makes more memorable)

a stitch in time saves nine

“If it doesn’t fit, you must acquit” — Johnnie Cochran

Headline example: Win Attention Or Lose Affection

5. Repetition, (gives a proverb-like feel)

the only thing we have to fear is fear itself” — FDR

Headline example: Compelling the Obvious Is Not Compelling

6. Symmetry (feels like wisdom)

ask not what your country can do for you — ask what you can do for your country” — JFK

Headline example: To State the Obvious Is Too Obviously Overstated

Finally, keep it pithy, avoid puns, and steer clear of cliches.

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Barrington Dyer

“Engineering Outcomes” - Tech Attorney, Engineer, Entrepreneur