UX writing challenge: Day 8

Let’s go to a concert!

Photo by Rachel Coyne on Unsplash

Scenario: The user is a casual music fan and (on occasion) goes to live concerts. They have a music player app on their phone.

Challenge: Tell the user that one of their favorite bands is playing live in their town. How would you compel them to want to go?

Headline: 30 characters max
Body: 45 characters max
Button: 25 characters

Points to keep in mind

1. The user is a casual music fan, so in order to motivate them for a concert, we need a compelling tone through our message.

What I came up with

Updated version-

Feel free to comment with your views on my challenge; criticism is appreciated as it will help me hone my skills 🙌🏻.

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