E110 Section 130

Research Paper Presentation

This assignment asks you to practice effectively and clearly communicating with an audience orally, as opposed to in writing, by giving a presentation based around your research paper. The presentation should be no more than 5 minutes long (with roughly 2 minutes of questions…

Research Paper Remix

In Rewriting, Joseph Harris makes the argument that digital platforms have opened up avenues for writers to reach a wider and more diverse group of readers, and that sometimes taking a draft and “remixing” it (often digitally) has the effect of spurring the project forward toward a new…

Revisions

Original:

Telomere length is proven to be critical for all forms of life. All organisms require them to be able to survive. Telomeres are produced by the enzyme telomerase which “adds the TTAGGG telomere sequence to the ends of chromosomes. The sequence, made of nucleotides, can only…

1. This past March I traveled to Antigua, a small island in the West Indies. Upon arriving to the island, from the plane window, all I could see was pastel colored houses and crystal-clear blue water. This was a very different sight from landing in say, Boston or New York City. As I was making my way to the hotel, I had about a 40-minute car ride…

Blog 6 — Revision of Introduction

Working in the dairy industry is a very taxing job for anyone to have for a long period of time. Before automated feeders, automated water buckets, and all other “normal” today technologies being a part of the dairy industry was a hard labor job. Even today with all the…

Blog Post 6

1. There is no debate surrounding the question of if instant replay makes officiating a game more accurate; but we ask ourselves, is instant replay really helping sports or damaging it? Those who argue that instant replay is beneficial for sports support their stance with reasons regarding higher accuracy and…

Blog 6: Revising

1. There of course are questions of how often this CSI Effect actually affects the thought processes of jurors. Some alarming research was done by Walden University which makes some strong claims about verdict influences. The research claimed that, “Most jurors (95%) reported that they watched CSI…

Revisions

• Paragraph from Draft 1 → pictured below
• Revisions from Draft 1 → pictured below

To revise my paragraph from the first Rough Draft, I used Harris’ technique of tracking revision. This technique allowed me to see first-hand, what changes I was making while…

Blog Post 6

Original: Although many people in society would disagree, I believe that body cameras should be used by every police officer because it has many positive effects that would not only help the officers but also the citizens they interact with. My paper will discuss the positive and negative impacts that body…