UX writing challenge: Day 9

Credit card expired.

Photo by Nathana Rebouças on Unsplash

Scenario: The user is trying to rent a car using an application but the credit card on file has expired.

Challenge: Write them an error message so that they can correct the problem.

Headline: 30 characters
Body: 45 characters

Points to keep in mind

1. Need a concise copy that helps the user complete their task.
2. Using a helpful and non judgemental tone.

What I came up with

Feel free to comment with your views on my challenge; criticism is appreciated as it will help me hone my skills 🙌🏻.

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