Reading “Just Right”
Or how to get your fix for this tragic tale of lust and betrayal
Let’s be honest — Medium is not set up for long serial fiction. It’s just not. What we need is a page format that helps you find all the stories in one place, allows you to navigate from episode to episode and not have to scroll endlessly through an author’s stories to get to the good stuff. So, just below here, we’ll try and set you up for success and make this all easier.
The tough part of writing a long serial fiction is not keeping up with the details of the plot or creating interesting characters. It’s keeping the reader engaged and moving forward through the story. No one wants to wait a week and have to watch the “previously on …” part of the show to remember what happened. The beauty of binge TV is to keep the story going smoothly and swiftly. And so we’ll try to recreate that experience here with some shortcuts.
The other issue is that since Just Right is told from four different perspectives by four different characters, so there’s a lot for the reader to keep up with. Clues and details are dropping from every angle in every episode. Narrators aren’t reliable because they’re only telling you what they see and hear and feel and think. It’s up to the reader to put it all together and follow the story and understand what’s really happening because things aren’t what they seem.
So, what to do? Just keep this handy guide bookmarked, and we’ll get you quickly through the story.
Just Right | Four characters; four stories; one murder
Part 1 — Wolfe: Devil in the Pale Moon Light
Part 2 — Goldi: She can’t be all bad. No one is. Well, she comes the closest.
Part 3 — Gretel: Smiley’s Trash Alley
Part 5 — Wolfe: First the Bad News
Part 6 — Goldi: The Three Bears
Part 7 — Gretel: Dinner for Two and a Show
Part 9 — Wolfe: Blow Your House Down
Part 10 — Goldi: Survival Instinct
Part 12 — Ivan: Days of Future Past
Part 13 — Wolfe: Mirror, Mirror
Part 14 — Goldi: Pistol Whipped
Part 15 — Gretel: Cash and Crimes
Part 16 — Ivan: Hope & Despair
Part 17 — Wolfe: Black & White & Red All Over
Part 19 — Gretel: Only One Way
Part 20 — Ivan: Grey, Lidless Eyes
Part 21 — Wolfe: Taste of Darkness
Part 22 — Goldi: Reaching for the Star
Part 23 — Gretel: Grinding Bones to Make Bread
Part 24 — Ivan: Lead into Goldi
Part 25 — Wolfe: The Wolf’s Den
Part 26 — Goldi: All That Glitters
Part 27 — Gretel: Fireflies in the Dark
Part 28 — Ivan: Wolf at the Door
Part 29 — Wolfe: Danse Macabre
Part 31 — Ivan: Without Burden
Part 32 — Wolfe: The Winding Path
Part 33 — Goldi: Inked in Link
Part 34 — Wolfe: Just Right for Me
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